moon’s patch on the doorstep
won’t shape your shadow
now that afternoon’s been crushed
by the slam of metal into blood
cooling
go now darling go
your gaze a total wild of love
before the screendoor
closed, memories untouched
by the chase of metal into bone
again
and again we break
this started out as a challenge on critical poet but i couldn’t use the ten words offered … didn’t even mean to write this really but my heroangelcat was killed on the road a few weeks ago whilst coming to greet me from the car .. guess i needed to try and write something but this is nothing like a tribute … maybe that will come when i am free of selfish tears
i love you, Rusty
I see your heart ripped open so vividly, almost too vividly, my heart breaks for you.
i logged on this morning to remove this post, or make it private, La Lunatique …
yes, perhaps it’s too ripped open for a reader to find bearable?
i don’t know now .. maybe i’ll just leave it alone, watch time turn the page?
Thank you for reading and bearing, dear soul …