just a thought yearned by Shell
(for J)
Night slips distance out of sky,
leaves tip breeze the nod and fly.
Time for moon to blossom dream;
let petals fall invisibly,
velvet curve tomorrow’s cheek;
full-moon aware they travel light.
Tomorrow, find stars in warm sand,
impossibly – they kiss his hand.
forget me now 
I have never seen that type of poetry before. I think the broken grammar works really well. It is like capturing a picture frozen in time. I like it!
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welcome Cendrine … i break grammar perhaps, almost certainly, though it flows … i hope … *gulp … i’m glad you like!! though i have a feeling you’d like some of my more overtly soulrites more *grin .. thank you, dear soul and i hope you return …
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“Time for moon to blossom dream” – I absolutely love this!
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that line is the heart of this, so thank you, Ashley .. ever so!
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nooo i haven’t gone missing but thank you, Paul, for missing me anyway! it’s just been a hectic w/end in between two hectic workweeks … *sigh
by way of torture i’ve recorded an older poem .. i like the concept even now but not sure i ever got it quite right, despite numerous edits ..
Hello. You have gone missing and I miss you. I miss your poetry which is simply fantastic, your podcasts which were favourites and you because you are simply wonderfully fantastical, Shell.
this piece marries consciousness and imagination… and what a heck of a honeymoon…
fun to say aloud, too…
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*heh … deliciously put, Chico and thanks! it was a joy to write – you know, not tormented by anything, no looming disasters or broken stuff … just, as you say, in de-light .. did you get chance to listen to my reading it?
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€5.00
There you go. That should cover a drink of your choice in an establishment of your chosing. Thanks!
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LOLOL .. why thank you dear Ario … *hic
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Mind if I steal this, change the ‘his’ to ‘her’ and read it to my girlfriend…?
I’ll pay royalties or something.
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what an honour, Ario! now make that change and read this to your love!
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That is very svelte and beautiful. Your podcast is one of my featured sites for the week. and delicate and velvety and lots of other ‘v’ words too, a very lovely poem.
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ohhh thank you, Paul, for the feature-link and for your most delicious comment! i couldn’t resist offering that last one, it seemed to complete that little collection. *hugs
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