this body’s vein-laced
pressure rises, fails
to hold rebellious breath
in protective custody,
snaps vain gravity
this time’s a-conscious
waiting stage in-venting,
you know, all that
done it, scene it stuff
humour’s vital drum
ribs pliant form,
nerveraw thrills intensify
then touch
like
this…
forget me now 
Really enjoyed this…….
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thank you Jo, i’m really glad you liked this … it’s good to see you again!
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Ooh.
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*heh … i think you got it, Noah *grin
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freefall emotion burst which works beautifully, like a sudden unfurling of energy,
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yes, that’s exactly it, Paul … thank you! S
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