response to ground by Giant Shadows
one breathslip and there there here
not what you think or even what you
felt right then. a moment falling now
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forget me now 
I saw your comment on my poem at PWB. I came to visit and to read your work. I enjoyed the 3 poems that I read very much. I will continue to visit, and enjoy more of your work.
Emilio
This is wonderful…..a perfect capture of splitsecond thoughts compressed…..and so poetic.
oOoo…like breath slipping into my
pores – love this gentleness.
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ohhhh what a gorgeous comment, Cynthia! Thank you!!
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that’s really nice. could this be considered a collaboration? two visions blurred into one.
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i’m glad you enjoyed this, shadows – and yes! it is, in truth, a collaboration … your piece is utterly gorgeous, way better than this, which is my simple attempt to honour the emotion of your beautiful creativity … so thank you, thank you, thank you …
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Not quite nothing, just enough to frame the moment, words like breath around the instant of loss of self. Be here now. You are wonderful, Shell.
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“framing the moment” .. yes … i often don’t really know consciously what i’m doing poetically, muse doesn’t clarify the psychic structure she’s deploying, if you know what i mean … giant shadows has a very special vibe and muse flowed with/in it … and now i’m wittering because i don’t know what to say to your wonderful comment, Paul … thank you …
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I imagine ‘here’ to be clutching my heart and ‘now’ to be releasing
quiet & beautiful
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you’ve got it exactly right, Lunatique … the movement of breath and being … thank you!
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mm, nice…i am fully present and falling into a bottomless Buddhist moment as i read this…
the placement and rhythm of the 2 “there”s and the itallicizing of the “here” and “now” completes this mindful meditation…
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thank you for such a lovely comment, Chico! you zoomed in on the heart of this tiny piece, yes indeed … i’m thrilled by that!
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