stars’ distant flight doesn’t break
sky silence down
here
thought moves
gentle leaves’
sweet green
tongue-soft
midnight on your breath
moves me to say …
stars’ distant flight doesn’t break
sky silence down
here
thought moves
gentle leaves’
sweet green
tongue-soft
midnight on your breath
moves me to say …
This really is a draft but whenever i tried to revise, it lost something more important than being complete … so i let it be … perhaps it will re-call me when it’s warm enough to sit outside in moonlight *smiles*
Thank you, Ario … your comments always make me happy. Have a wonderful w/end my friend!
Just to say that I thought gentle leaves’ / sweet green / tongue-soft / midnight on your breath is brilliant. Very precise and very sensual.
Hope you’re well, Shell. Have a good weekend,
Ario